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The Heartbreak

I’m melting inside
I’m loosing my soul
I’m loosing myself
I’m loosing control
I’m spiraling down
I’m falling fast
I’m deathly afraid
I’m afraid of my past
I’m dissolving into nothing
I’m nothing here
I’m disappearing from your thoughts
I’m far from being near
And as I’m melting inside
It’s all because of you
I can’t sustain these feelings
That I know to be true.
Random depressing poem. Sorry about this.
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IMYOURSYOUDONTWANTME Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I can relate to this right now. Hurts like hell. Just been told by the (secret) love of my life that they are in a relationship, then I got upset, and had to suffer through a long hug off that person. But anyway great job, and keep up the good work (:
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BackRoseSin Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Thats normally how I feel, so Im very cynical. Seriously, Im gna steal this, and add it to my collection [with ur permission of course]
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2007
Sure, why not...?
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BackRoseSin Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
lol i will l8r
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turketspy Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
You seriouslt do have a hobby of making me cry!!! :cries: This reminds me so much of the guy I like....I used to see him in the hall and talk to him all the time...and now I never see him anymore...:cries:
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
.......... I'M SORRY.
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turketspy Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
:sniff: Then...I was gonna look for him in the hall today...But I had to go to the doctor!!! :cries:
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
*bows* I'M SOOOO SORRY!!
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turketspy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007
S'okay...
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shadowofthedesert Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
I like this, even if it is sad... I've wrote depressing poems too...
I hope you feel better. And keep writing this. It'll help you with negative emotions. Trust me, it's better than bottling up.
No reason to be sorry... ^_^ :hug:
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