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The Heartbreak

I’m melting inside
I’m loosing my soul
I’m loosing myself
I’m loosing control
I’m spiraling down
I’m falling fast
I’m deathly afraid
I’m afraid of my past
I’m dissolving into nothing
I’m nothing here
I’m disappearing from your thoughts
I’m far from being near
And as I’m melting inside
It’s all because of you
I can’t sustain these feelings
That I know to be true.
Random depressing poem. Sorry about this.
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IMYOURSYOUDONTWANTME Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I can relate to this right now. Hurts like hell. Just been told by the (secret) love of my life that they are in a relationship, then I got upset, and had to suffer through a long hug off that person. But anyway great job, and keep up the good work (:
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BackRoseSin Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Thats normally how I feel, so Im very cynical. Seriously, Im gna steal this, and add it to my collection [with ur permission of course]
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2007
Sure, why not...?
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BackRoseSin Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
lol i will l8r
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turketspy Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
You seriouslt do have a hobby of making me cry!!! :cries: This reminds me so much of the guy I like....I used to see him in the hall and talk to him all the time...and now I never see him anymore...:cries:
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
.......... I'M SORRY.
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turketspy Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
:sniff: Then...I was gonna look for him in the hall today...But I had to go to the doctor!!! :cries:
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
*bows* I'M SOOOO SORRY!!
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turketspy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007
S'okay...
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shadowofthedesert Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
I like this, even if it is sad... I've wrote depressing poems too...
I hope you feel better. And keep writing this. It'll help you with negative emotions. Trust me, it's better than bottling up.
No reason to be sorry... ^_^ :hug:
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
You sure...?
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shadowofthedesert Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
Positive.
Trust me, I bottled everything up for years. And I didn't do anything to get my emotions out. I ended up in a mental institution for a full year. You don't want that happening to you.
And if you're ever upset, you can talk to me about it. I may not know what to say to help you, but I'll do what I can.
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
Oh, my God, wow...... You really understand all of this...
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shadowofthedesert Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
^^; Heh... I guess so. I mean, I've just experianced a lot and I try to do what I can to help others. I may not know you all too well, but if you're upset, I can't help but feel upset as well. I'm just a caring person... ^_^;
It one of my weaknesses/faults I guess... I can't stand to see people in any kind of pain.
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
Awww... thank you so much...
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shadowofthedesert Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
Any time. ^_^
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
<33333
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dogz911 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
awww. when did you decide to write this..?!
.. it's so sad.... like.. like.. aww.. :cries:
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
Last night.
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dogz911 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
..wow.. are you okay.. or was it just kinda ... there...?
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
Not quite... okay.
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dogz911 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
.. what do you mean..? i'm confused!!!! >.<
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
Meh. I can never be okay. Just try to forget. And forgetting keeps getting harder.
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dogz911 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007
.. yeah.. i'm sorry..
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2007
No problem.
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dogz911 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
... okay... so now.. i feel like writing something... =^^=
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moohgough Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
I like the use of repetitism. XD
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
Thank you. I thought it would make it better. :D
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moohgough Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
hehe. yup
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Elizascrub Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2007
:(
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shippuuden-fandub Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2007
Sorry...
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